I like it!
I really like it.
All I can say is: NEVER state that you're new or that this is your first flash or anything remotely looking like this. This flash is most probably going to get blammed (sad but true...) 'cause you said it was your first.
I like it, so all I can suggest is just waiting a while (so people forget) and then resubmitting, but don't say you already submitted it once then though.
Also- I'd advice you to remove two of the three "!"'s...